The tortoise & The hare.

Greece and Crete.

WALT Summarise information we read.

C.J Wilson debonos thinking hats.

Malama honui voyage.

In the morning we went down to our buddy class I had to take to buddies because there was heaps of the juniors and less sean years. When we got outside both busses went see my class and the year eighties had to go last. When the bus got back to school we saw one of the old teacher aids his name was mr wong.

We have arrived and had got off the bus at P.t England reserve. Well our teachers were looking for the rest of the school I told my buddies to behave or else I will report them to a teacher. As we walked over to the rest of the school I felt nervous because I haven’t really done this before.

As soon as I saw the ocean I did not feel nervous. When we sat down I thought the waka in front of us was the waka but it turned out that the waka coming towards us and it was the waka. There were a lot of people on the waka so a silver boat had to get some of them three times to shore.

But before they got off the boat we had to perform a haka. Then I man gave a speech that man was my friend Rickys grandpa. Then we had to sing a song it was honore. Then another man gave a speech about maui and the hook of the heavens. When they finished I think we had to the the haka once more but twice. When we finished we had  to sing another song but this song was to fast for me. But I still sang along then another man gave a speech then he told us school by school to come along in a row because we had finished the ceremony. We the last

school to go and shake their hand.When I reached the end of the line I felt proud to be in this school.

T.J.

Nice work I like the way you write heaps of word I fixed up only 3 mistake so that’s good.