Hero Narrative
WALT:Create a narrative with deeper information.
Success Criteria.
-I can uses nouns,verbs,adjectives & adverbs to make writing interesting.
-I can use narratives structure to organize my ideas.-Character,setting,problem,Reaction,Action,
Consequence,Resolution.
Chapter one
Introduction.
Hi my name is Sifa. My super hero name is Captain S
I live in New york the best city in the world. I am going to tell you how I became a hero. Well it was two years ago I was working in a lab and chemicals fell on me. They called the hospital immediately but they said that they will be there in 2 hours so they said you know what we will drop him off our self. So they drove me to the hospital.I was in there for a whole year. When I got out I found out that I have super powers. So I decided to join in with Marvel. My skin color is brown. My hair color is black. My super powers a speed,strength & smart’s.
Chapter two
my nemeses
My nemeses name is dr evil. he has been my nemeses ever since i joined marvel. he is always trying to take over new york but I keep on stopping him.
Face:White
Power’s:Speed
Hair:Blond
Costume:Black.
Logo:Skull
Chapter three
The Problem
I have an emergency call it say’s that the most evilest guy has looked up nearly all of the super heroes,take over the city of New york & make the city work for him. I have to go I’ll meet you there.
Chapter four
The fight.
Okay now we have to sneak into his lair and attack. He had to have back so he called for captain America. Captain america said what does he have to do.Captain S said just distract him well he builds something to shock him. He build a electric fence with his speed and smart’s then he shouted to captain america to stop. So he ran up to dr evil and gave him a right hook and a left hook with his super strength.
Chapter five
The Resolution
dr evil had enough so he stopped and shocked him until he lets all the heroes go and commanded to the city to stop and get back home & look after their children. so dr evil done everything he said. So they put dr evil into the marvel prison.
3 comments:
Hi Sifa make sure when you put a full stop make sure you make capital letters
Hi sifa this is a great, but maybe next time you could put some punctuation in this, and check the sentences to see if they make sence ( because it's a bit of a tongue twister ) On the other hand it's briliant.
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