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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, 31 October 2017

How Can I Be A Good Citizen?

How Can I Be A Good Citizen?
What I’ll be writing about is how can I be or become a good citizen? So it will be talking about what I can do to become a great citizen.

For me to become a good citizen I could help out in the community like help people carry their shopping to their car and helping elderly cross the road. For example I could help people that are struggling to carry their shopping into the car by taking some of their groceries for them and putting it into their car. For example if I see an elderly trying to cross the road and there is to many cars going past I could help walk across safely by guiding them.

If I want to become a good citizen I should always keep our community clean. For me to become a good citizen I should always respect the areas I am in. For example I could get are group of friends or family to help me clean the reserves or the parks around our community to keep everything clean and tidy or I can do it by myself by picking up rubbish the isn’t mine.

I can become a good citizen by respecting the laws consistently. In order for me to become a good citizen I should always respect the laws of the community and country. For example I should the right things around others and even when no one is around I can also help people to understand why we have laws in our country and why we need to follow them.

This pretty much sums up what I am talking about so yea. For me the become a good citizen I should help others in need, I should keep our community clean, I should always follow the laws or the country and help others to understand the meaning of the laws.

This task was given to us by our teacher Ms Komor. She gave us this task because she wanted us to practice what we will be doing for our writing test. The subject she gave us was How can I be a good citizen but we will have a different subject for our test. What I found challenging was trying to figure out ways of how I can become a good citizen. What I didn't find challenging was the introduction and the conclusion. Next time I'll try add more information to my writing so it's long and the reader could have a better understanding of what I am writing about.

Thursday, 7 September 2017

Ko Hai Au?


WALT: Relate to our ancestors.
Who am I?. This is an ancestry poem created by me it talks about me and my ancestors. This was an enjoyable activity what. I liked about it was that we got to talk about our ancestors and ourselves. What I didn't like about this was the planning because it took us two weeks because we had to read other poems and talk about what we think it is. If you enjoyed reading then please leave a comment.

Wednesday, 2 November 2016

My Weekend

My Weekend

On Saturday I went to church, I got their and my class had already started. Our memory verse is Matthew 5:44 Love your enemies and pray for those who persecute you, that you may be of your Father in Heaven. After reading than we had a quiz boys vs girls to see who remembered what we have been talking about for the last few lessons. We were off to a bad start and then we got back up and finished it and won the quiz. Then we had to go inside church. Our women's ministry was doing our preach on saturday. After church finished we went home and had lunch and after lunch we went back to church for AY’s it stands for Adventist Youth they were our Penrose Tongan Youth group. Then we went to a funeral that was part of my nana's side. The person that past away was a man but I didn’t know him at all. After the funeral we went home and then I fell asleep are 10:00 pm.


On Sunday I went to drop of my dad to a program at church and then we left to my aunt's house and stayed there for 30 minutes. Then we went down to Glen Innes to my grandfather's house. We stayed there till 4:00 in the afternoon. Then we went back home and my brother went down to go and pick up my dad. Then I went to sleep and woke and it was 6:17 so I went and ate and came back and went to sleep for school.

Tuesday, 13 September 2016

I Am Lost In The Jungle

I Am Lost In The Jungle

Day 1
My name is Siosifa and I have been  lost in the jungle for 1 week. I have decided to write a journal to keep track of what has been happening these past few days. I have been hiking and haven’t stopped till now write this down. I miss my home and my family I have been wondering if they sent are search party for me. I started dehydrating but then I saw are river up a head so I ran as quick as I could I was drinking it for three minutes. I started hiking and saw the sun was about to go down I ran as fast as I could to try make shelter out of sticks I made a fire next to where I was sleeping so I can keep warm during the night.

Day 2
I was struggling to find food and water  but then I saw a deer in the distance. So I watched it and followed it to his habitat. I made a spear so I can  stab it and eat it for dinner. I saw some lions so I ripped my sleeves and wrapped it around my spear and lit it up to scare them away. I ran and scared  them as I ran I saw the deer I decided to leave the lions alone and kill the deer to survive. I killed the deer and dragged it back to shelter and cooked it in the fire. I left to cool down. I went to look for the river to fill my water bottle again. I went back to shelter and ate the deer but then the sun was about to fall so I went to sleep. And once again another day has past.

Day 3
I want to go home but I can't find my way out. I hiked and saw are big tree I climbed it to try find which way  to get out but the jungle was to big to find a way out. I climbed back down and saw a lion I stayed up in the tree for a few hours and once it left are ran away back to shelter to get my spear to protect me from danger. I was hiking and hiking till I came to are stop. I saw some people I ran towards them but they drove away from me. A crate dropped out of the back it was filled with guns. The only gun. All I wanted was the flare gun so I can signal a  helicopter that comes past. I went back to shelter to go back to rest from this hard day.

Day 4

Today is the day. The day I finally get out of here. I hiked and hiked to the top of the mountain there were are couple animals there. Also dangerous animals. I waited and waited and still nothing happened. I went back to shelter and sat there for while. As I was sitting down I was losing faith in me surviving. But then something happened just before I was about sleep. There was a helicopter. I   grabbed the flare gun and shoot it. They flew down to pick me up. They asked me are bunch of questions. After that they took me back home and dropped me off to my house. My parents and brothers ran out and gave me the biggest hug I have ever got.

Friday, 12 August 2016

My Writing Goals For Term Three


This my writing goals for term three.
What I wished I could do is that I could add some more goals in.

Tuesday, 9 August 2016

Information Report On Being Famous

INFORMATION REPORT WRITING PLAN:
Famous
Click here for an example of an information report

Title
What would I like to be famous for.
Introduction:What are the big ideas in this report?
Opening Statement (no more than one sentence)
Brief description about about the key ideas in this report.
This information report is based on what I want to be famous for.
Paragraph One
What Are The Benefits About Being Famous.
This Paragraph is about what is the good side of being famous.
  • The good thing about being famous you will get lots of money for performing for other people around the country.
  • A good thing about being famous is you will have heaps of transport to get around.
  • A good thing about being famous is the you will make new friends with people around the world.
  • You can also have the opportunity to tour around the world.
Paragraph Two

What Are The DownSide To Being Famous
This paragraph is about all the bad things about being famous.
  • A bad thing about being famous is that you might not spend time with family while traveling around the world.
  • A bad thing about being famous is that paparazzi is always stalking you wherever you are going.
  • A bad thing about being famous is that their are always haters trying to capture you.
  • ARE bad thing about being famous is that someone from your family might get kidnapped you will have to pay a ransom to get them back.
Paragraph Three

What Does It Mean To Be Famous
This paragraph is about what does it mean to be famous.
  • To be famous you will have to be well known.
  • To be famous you will have to perform in heaps of stuff.
  • To be famous you will have to have lots of fans.
  • To be famous you will have to be popular.
Diagrams supported with information
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Conclusion
This is all I want to share with. Thank you for reading and please leave a comment.




Friday, 24 October 2014

Why terms & condition are inportant

WALT write an explanation success criteria.


-Title
-Introductions-definition
-Ideas and supporting
-Conclusion
-Headings
-Punctuation


Terms and conditions are the rules of signing up
to something. They tell you what to expect and
what they want from you.


They can block your account.
You're to young for some websites.
Parents/People
responsible for you when you are in trouble.
Hackers could you down through websites.
You could be granting them access to your personal details,contacts,photos and other    information.
1- When you are young for websites
When you are to young for websites they will not let you sign up for there website.


                 2-Blocking your account.
When you create a account for anything the people that create that website can block your account so you can never get back on it.


3-Parents get in trouble.
When you sign up for a website and your parents let you then they get sent to court  for letting you sign up.


4-Hackers.
Sometimes when you download an app you are  giving hackers permission to hake you on information

Tuesday, 10 June 2014

How does a volcano erupt ?

I am learning to write explanations in different forms. I changed my explanation about Why we need to have fun into a script. Then I used the script to make an animated video.


how does a volcano erupt by king of tonga on GoAnimate

What is fun?

I am learning to write explanations in different forms. I changed my explanation about Why we need to have fun into a script. Then I used the script to make an animated video.


What is Fun? by king of tonga on GoAnimate